Wednesday, October 5, 2016

What does "High Concept" mean?

We were discussing "High Concept" or "Commercial Appeal" at the office yesterday and realized this is something that trips up many authors and agents. So here are my very random thoughts on the subject.

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What is High Concept?

First, let me say what it's not:
  • It's not your whole book.
  • Not inherently lowest common denominator plot (like a literary or think piece plot).
  • Not just a movie pitch (Stranger Things: ET meets Aliens and every other 80s movie).
  • Not another term for gimmicky.

High Concept has five elements:
  1. broad appeal, 
  2. ooh factor, 
  3. originality, 
  4. standout setting, and 
  5. illuminates a universal human truth.


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  1. The premise has broad appeal which I know is kind of vague since appeal is really subjective but the concept should be distinct, easily parsed with a clear premise that is immediately intriguing and taps into a wide range of readers' interest.
    A great example today was Kami Garcia's upcoming YA pitched as Fast and the Furious meets Romeo and Juliet. You know from that high concept pitch to expect a high octane adventure with suped-up cars and star-crossed lovers in rival gangs/groups.
  2. It has an "Ooh Factor" built in. Or as Corvisiero Literary Agency, Jr. Literary Agent Cate Hart put it, "where originality meets familiarity." For example: Truthwitch by Susan Dennard – what’s original – a world of magic; what's familiar is the twisting of the Tristan and Isolde tale and the Arthurian Legend.
    This IT factor can be delivered in the execution or the premise – a story we know retold with a unique structure, a twist on a trope, mash-up of two genres. Think about what catches your eye in a flap copy or new TV show (again Stranger Things – the familiar of Spielberg and King, yet a new take on the classic “pre-teen friendship plus horror sci-fi" trope.) But the mash-up or trope needs to be one with wide appeal. If your mash-up is too unique or your trope is too niched, it loses its commercial appeal because not many readers may know the trope or pieces you're mashing up to go, "oooh, I can't wait to read that!"
  3. Originality and Familiarity - What are the stakes? Why should we care about the protagonist's plight? The reader should engage with the main character immediately and feel like the stakes are as high for them as it is for the main character. In The Neverending Story, Bastian is immediately immersed in this world where Atreyu's plight is tied to his own.
    Look at your stories, what are the stakes for your main character? Are they high enough to make you breathless with anticipating their next move? Will readers feel like they want to stick with your character all the way through to the end of the story and come out of it feeling like Bilbo returning from his great adventure? A little crispy, a little heartbroken and still exhilarated by the experience.
  4. A standout setting that's still familiar enough for the reader to connect and engage (there's that word again) in. Think the Red Queen where it’s set in this distant future, but still a familiar world, or kind of like the Shannara Chronicles – 4000 years in future and man has evolved into elves and ogres, trolls, etc. Harry Potter where the muggle world is just one part of this greater wizarding world we get to explore.
  5. A Story That Illuminates Universal Human Truth. Your concept needs to be more than the book. It should challenge expectations, provide insight by illuminating a universal truth. It has to be about something that's bigger than the book (Hunger Games, a book about children killing children.)
I hope this post is helpful when you're working on your next projects or polishing up your current WIPs for mass market appeal. The examples listed are primarily for YA and MG but they really apply to all fiction genres and age-groups.

Thursday, March 3, 2016

Welcome Mayra Cuevas to Corvisiero Literary Agency

Allow me to introduce the latest #TeamCorvisiero member, Mayra Cuevas, whose contemporary YA romance TETONKA WILDERNESS CAMP FOR YOUNG LADIES (and tiny pigs) hooked me with just the title. I mean, there are tiny pigs in the title! You can’t go wrong with that, right?

Mayra still remembers the exact moment when she decided she would write novels one day. She was twelve years-old curled up with a copy of Isabel Allende’s Casa de los Espíritus (The House of the Spirits) in her home in Puerto Rico. Inspired by Allende and later by Gabriel García Marquez she decided journalism was the best career choice for someone who wanted to tell stories.

Since then, Mayra has worked as a TV and digital journalist for CNN, HLN, In Session on truTV (Court TV) and EFE International News Agency.

She has reported on domestic and international events but nothing compares to the thrill of finishing her first fiction manuscript.

Mayra has a bachelor’s in communications and master’s in investigative journalism. She has taught workshops on research for writers at the Romance Writers of America national conference. She also volunteers with the We Need Diverse Books organization.

When she is not working on a story, Mayra volunteers at her local Buddhist meditation center, where she serves on the board of directors. She is also an avid traveler and cook.

Mayra lives north of Atlanta with her husband, also a journalist, two teenage step-sons and their cat. Their family’s claim to fame was appearing in Season 2 of Buying and Selling with the Property Brothers.

In her blog, MayraCuevas.com she writes about craft, publishing, culture and spirituality.

Tuesday, October 13, 2015

ATTENTION: Change in Submission Guidelines

In order to keep up with the volume of queries I'm receiving and spare my computer the hundreds of attachments I'm downloading every day, I've decided to stop accepting attachments in my queries. Most of my colleagues, if not all of them, have their queries include the synopsis and sample pages pasted in the body of the email to avoid downloading viruses to their computers. As an avid Mac user, I've never really worried about viruses so I was fine with attachments. But I've noticed that having attachments limits my time and ability to access queries when I want to get through them quickly.

I've started using my iPhone and iPad more and more for agency work and realized that it's just easier to scroll down and read the full work while I'm waiting for the kid to get out of band practice, or in line at Starbucks waiting for my Venti Soy Iced Vanilla Chai than it is to wait for the attachments to download to my phone (if I have room, curse you beloved iTunes Music). Yes, I check my queries while standing in line, sometimes while waiting for the previews to begin at the movie theater!

I want to be able to respond to queries faster so I've decided to do away with attachments and have changed my submission guidelines to reflect the change.

Paste it all in now!
Please continue to keep your synopsis to 2 pages and only include the first 5 pages of your manuscript pasted immediately following the synopsis in the body of the email.

Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Welcome Michaela Grey to the Corvisiero Literary Agency

I’m super stoked to welcome Michaela Grey to #TeamCorvisiero. Her male/male erotic romance, BUTTONS certainly pushed all of mine in the best way with her deliciously kinky men exploring their relationship in the BDSM lifestyle while confronting their demons.

Welcome Michaela Grey!

Michaela Grey told stories to put herself to sleep since she was old enough to hold a conversation in her head. When she learned to write, she began putting those stories down on paper. She and her family reside in the Texas hill country with their cats, and she is perpetually on the hunt for peaceful writing time, which her four children make difficult to find.

Michaela started her career with Dreamspinner Press. Her first book is called Coffee Cake, published in May of 2015, and its sequel is Beignets, coming in October of 2015.

Queer romance is her happy place, and she delights in pushing her limits, testing her abilities and forcing herself to write scenarios she’s not familiar with. Angst is her lifeblood, and she wants you to know that your tears are delicious. (But don’t worry, she’ll always give you a happy ending.)

When she’s not writing, she’s knitting while watching TV or avoiding responsibilities on Tumblr, where she shamelessly ogles pretty people and tries to keep her cat off the keyboard.

Tuesday, September 1, 2015

Welcome Julia Rubin to the Corvisiero Literary Agency

I’m so excited to introduce you guys to my new client, Julia Lynn Rubin whose LGBTQ YA manuscript I fell in love with the minute I read the query. It’s a young adult gritty tale about best friends who come to terms with who they are in their California town and who they can be if they ever escape.

It’s a modern The Perks of Being a Wallflower meets The Outsiders with a raw and honest depiction of life as a high school sophomore in a town that is as vivid a character as the main characters, Jesse and Jack. I can talk about this book for hours and find nuances I’d missed on the back-to-back reads I did of the manuscript.


Welcome Julia Rubin!


Julia Lynn Rubin lives the writer’s life in Brooklyn, where she is currently pursuing an MFA in Writing for Children & Young Adults at The New School. She earned her BA in Anthropology & Film Studies from the University of Pittsburgh. She has been writing books, poems, and stories since first grade, and loves reading about everything from film analysis to psychology. Her short stories have appeared in the North American Review, The Lascaux Review, and Black Denim Lit, to name a few.

She is passionate about realism and diversity in teen literature, and hopes to one day own a French bulldog, a Boston terrier, or perhaps a mix of the two.


Welcome to ‪#‎TeamCorvisiero, Julia!